That's a leeetle better, and at least I'm on to another scene. The scene in which our heroine confronts her dastardly stepmother.
Last line written:
Daphne stared at the five sausage fingers bedecked in emerald and sapphire rings, one of which looked horribly familiar. Mama's engagement ring. She forgot her manners.
What Daphne says next is a decision for tomorrow.
2 comments:
Love the new theme and the new words. Excellent!
a new theme is a good as a holiday :-)
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